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Reviews For: Waiting for the Pain to Come
EarthHealer 2003-11-21 . chapter 1
Oh. Good job. I have no idea who it's about because NOBODY TELLS ME ANYTHING!, but oh well. It's cute. Liked the seven Wed morning analogy. Good job all around.
Love much,
Megs
Silent Star4 2003-11-20 . chapter 1
whee, another good poem. Don't get who you're talking about, but then again I'm the last to know everything. Anyways, good job!
Starlight Maiden 2003-11-19 . chapter 1
"I tossed them out in favour of pretty much anything..." I love that. This is a really great poem...it's got your style written all over it, nice!
pennydeath 2003-11-17 . chapter 1
Period at the end seemed off. Sorry...

But amazing.
One With Moonlight 2003-11-16 . chapter 1
I dont know whether to say congratulaitons or no worries after what happened, but in any event, thanks for sharing it in prose.
Juliet Squared 2003-11-15 . chapter 1
hey guess what?! mum let me check email! just this once though. but yeah, i like this poem. you couldve used the seven wednesday mornings analogy more, cuz its really cool. like once more at the end. but its cool, i can almost relate, except for the fact that i still like my crush. lol. anyways, before mum starts wondering what the heck im doin thats taking so long i'm gonna get offline. ttyl!
Filia Regalis 2003-11-15 . chapter 1
Sad to say, but I can relate to this. This is really good though, you have a wonderful gift!
sportynitemare 2003-11-15 . chapter 1
hey...tha was great...i can really relate to ur poetry...esp. this one! lol...sorry i keep forgeting to review and write some of my own poetry...but im really busy!! but that was a great poem...i like how u quoted the song...matchbox20 is a good band...great poem.
keep writing_Cyn
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