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| Aberrant Lycanthrope 2008-07-08 ch 4,   | too wordy and wandering, i give up until you update |
| Aberrant Lycanthrope 2008-07-08 ch 3, | they both need professional help |
| Aberrant Lycanthrope 2008-07-08 ch 2, | holy shit, someone needs to take a chill pill |
| Aberrant Lycanthrope 2008-07-08 ch 1, | this is a good start, much more interaction than someday beth... |
| steph 2004-09-03 ch 5, | I think MIA is a most apt title for this chapter. After all, YOU've been MIA for some time too! really do hope you'll continue and update soon. What's this about Travis leaving..?! ahh. NO!! haha. Guess we'll all just have to wait and see where you'll take this. =| |
| zane 2004-07-23 ch 5, | I've spent the last few hours reading Someday, Beth and this sequel... and they are both amazing. Ever since Mark was first introduced, I have been hoping that he and Suzy would end up together (though that probably won't happen). I DO hope that you decide to continue this story - I am definitely looking forward to more! |
| Tragedy is Love 2004-05-01 ch 1, | whoa hey, found your story. sorry about not looking for it earlier but you know ... anyway, i'm back and ready to go! |
| Aurelione 2004-02-03 ch 3, | Jeez...the melodrama. I SERIOUSLY do KNOW what it feels like to be Suzy; when all the shit just keeps on getting dumped and dumped and dumped and there's no fuckin' end in sight. I HATE it. Can't those bastards even have a little fucking sensitivity? Mark was pratically asking for it when he kept on whining and griping about "dear little Cherie". At least Suzy keeps her problems to her fucking self! This is a fantastic story. See how it gets me so riled up? You are SO on my fave list! |
| Aurelione 2004-02-03 ch 2, | Great story! Has a shitload of potential..and I'm off to read some more! |
| Jazzy Kitty 2004-01-20 ch 5, | I'm really glad you got the next chapter up. I think that taking a break from writing this story really helped; it seems you're right back on track! um but anyway - Yea, this was a great chapter! Quite long (which is a good thing!), and I think it was really sweet of Suzy to prepare a surprise for Travis. I have a hunch about what she bought. Two ideas, actually, and I'm trying to figure out which one seems more probable according to the descriptions. I really enjoyed the section on Luke, because we usually don't get to hear much about him, and he's a really well developed character. All in all, this was an excellent re-start. Great job, keep it up! Kitty Harlande |
| stephblue84 2004-01-16 ch 1, | I've never actually reviewed a story before but felt the need to when you said you were taking a break from Kiss My Feet, I absolutley love your story and am beggin you to continue as i can't get enough of Suzy and Travis! |
| Jazzy Kitty 2003-12-14 ch 5, | oh, ok... that's fine, just keep on updating The Price of Stilettos, I can tell already that it's going to be really good! I'm still interested in seeing where this, with Suzy and Travis and everyone else, is going to go. Take your time, don't feel obligated to give your readers chapters, because that's when a story starts to twist out of the author's original ideas. . . Keep up the good work, I'll keep on reading The Price of Stilettos! Kitty |
| Midnight Owl 2003-12-12 ch 5, | i was a little disappointment about the anti-update thing but i totally get what you're saying about brain blocks. i get those alot... i'm just going to check out your other story! |
| Midnight Owl 2003-12-07 ch 4, | Aw... poor dylan. good chapter. update soon plz. |
| tricklingdust 2003-12-07 ch 4, | Ack, gotta be brief, great chapter, please update soon! |