C'est bien. Very simple but it says what it needs to say and thats what I like about it.
I don't think I could write a poem that made any sense, even with my 3 years of French.

hi!
awsome poem!
how long are you studying french right now?i'm going to french lessons for almost 4 years now...but i'm very very bad in it... "gg"
you like french?
wb,
bye,noangel

En Francais, impressive. keep on going... you've got a knack for writing0)

En francais! Combien d'annees etudies-tu francais? Ce poeme est chouette. Un peu simple, mais on ne le peut pas juger trop dur. La poesie semble plus belle en francais, n'est-ce pas?

I really enjoy all your poetry. :)