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Reviews For: My story, her story

teh tarik
2003-11-26
ch 1,
Very good! It had a very nice rhyming pattern and a smooth uninterupted flow of words. Great job.
Werecat99
2003-11-21
ch 1,
I liked that. Short, but with beatiful imagery, full with valor and magic.

Good work.
Nhi
2003-11-15
ch 1,
Well I thought this was very good. I'm not much of a poet so I don't know much. I've read a lot and don't say 'ow everyone has said that or this' this is me. I say this is good and you have a lot of potential. Good luck.

-N.T.
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