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| teh tarik 2003-11-26 ch 1, | Very good! It had a very nice rhyming pattern and a smooth uninterupted flow of words. Great job. |
| Werecat99 2003-11-21 ch 1, | I liked that. Short, but with beatiful imagery, full with valor and magic. Good work. |
| Nhi 2003-11-15 ch 1, | Well I thought this was very good. I'm not much of a poet so I don't know much. I've read a lot and don't say 'ow everyone has said that or this' this is me. I say this is good and you have a lot of potential. Good luck. -N.T. |