the first two lines are really delicious, like taking a bite of a luscious apple...very good job...

truly yours...

oh! good job on this! i love it!

gorgeous. morbid, fascinating and so faintly vampiric (for the cliche at heart). it sends delightful shivers down my spine. so. very. lovely.

~* noelle

I like!Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.

this one ** rocks its going under my favorites immediately!! i love it. maybe its just my addiction to blood and vampires :shrug:

had a scary "aftertaste"...but very, very good all the same.

very thrilling, very senusual. wow.

Awesomeness.

I'm becoming addicted to your morbid and somewhat cynical but not-quite-angst-ridden and depressed style. Yet another set of perfectly matched, dark-but-lovely images.

Wow, this is really powerful, and I dont usually go for Haiku's

That was awesome.
I'm running out of adjectives to describe you and your writing.
So good.
-Jessica

you write such amazing haikus.

Interesting piece. Quite dark, but I'm a dark person myself, so this sort of thing attracts me. Very well written, turning romance into viciousness; pleasure to pain.
Thanks for the review as well!

Tee hee. ;] This was really delicious. I loved it.

Cool... morbid.