i love your stories so much! you must continue sometime!

Seriously, I adore this. Kal (kalmia raphael) was right when she said you write some of the best slash. Damn, continue you.. ** hag! Hmm, I love it already and it's so .. interesting :) I'll bugger off now but it's seriously good.

Oh, this is really good! Can I expect to see more? I really want to!

I liked the chapter. Update soon, please. Thanks. I want to know what Shin is going to do when he wakes up.

gah, I wasn't going to review, but I decided to be bothered. *hits self to wake up*
hehehh.. interesting chapter.. Gotta keep Ari in there to represent us XD
aww... Terra and Shin ^_^ *glomps* gr.. Evil Luke.. >.<
Ok, my review is highly un-good and I need (more) sleep but - point of the review - I like it, it's good, although a bit unrealistic to/for me, and I hope you update it soon!
Computer committing ritual suicide - ahh yes, there there *pats shoulder*
Peace.
Munku-JGSPTV ^_^

O.o...
All right, I have to say that you have a seriously twisted mind. Take it with a grain of sugar -- no offense or anything.
But...shame of all shames (except not really) it *is* good... (except the lack of commas in some places hurt my eyes).
(Yes, I'm a grammar-nut. Sue me. :p)
Here's what I have left to say: This is one seriously ** up love triangle. If it could be called that.
*laughs*
Keep writing, though. Take everything in here as a compliment, aside from the comma-remark.
*hugs*
~ Ouva

*hugs your legs* I LOVE YOUR STORIES! I LOVE TERRA!! I LOVE SHIN! I DEFEINITELY DO NOT LOVE LUKE! he's creepy. *shudders* he needs a good kick in the balls. MORE PLEASE~

hey!! you should totally continue this! it's great!

hm... interesting start. i dont like luke. he sounds like a sick bastard to me o well. Shin and Terra sound like nice guys. i hope nothing bad happens to them.
~Max

Yay! I thought you had dropped off the planet or something...^_^
I really like this. Terra and Shin seem like they would be so cute together. You didn't describe Luke at all though, what he looks like, and his age, and things like that. Or else you did, and I missed it. ^^;;
You're so creative with your names! Though Terra and Darra sound a lot alike...Unless I'm pronouncing them wrong.

I love it! You HAVE to write more - your characters, they're - m. Damn. I love you. *Clings.*

hey, i like this! ^^ hehe yes luke is a little too creepy for his own good... but if there was a shin/terra matchup then i'd be happy! ^^ well keep it up, i'm sure you'll find inspiration _some_where...

-mo

Hee I say, hee! Great start.. gr. evil Luke.. >.< *bashes up against a wall* Oh well.. *tosses a now non-recognisable figure away*
You set it up really well, and you've represented the fans!! *cough* Arielle *cough* So yes... I like the idea of this one.. I don't have any ideas :| So... get inspired and write some more of this!

tis lovely ^_^ i like the characters, the japanese customs are a nice touch... and i almost laughed when terra said 'are you in love with me??' ^^;; the anime-corruption is fun... and luke... gah, i dont know if i like him or if he scares me O_O maybe a bit of both. i guess i'll only start to dislike him if he gets abusive or something... he doesn't sound too dangerous right now ^^;; i want to know more about him, at least... i'm not very certain about how he looks... well, anyway, loving the story ^^ *waves flags and cheers*