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El.GrinGo
2008-07-16
ch 18,
abuseAw, this story was so sad! I hope we can still have that final chapter and epilogue up! I've been waiting for it for such a long time!

You have a great writing skill despite a few spelling mistakes throughout the story.

I love this story so much! I'm glad that they are together now!
Maxegirl1313
2008-07-15
ch 18,
abuseIt's been two years. If you don't update I'm gonna... EAT YOUR... SOUL..taco?
0.0 NightRiders 0.0
2008-07-03
ch 5,
abusevery nice
BurntSky
2008-06-30
ch 18,
abuseWONDERFUL STORY!!

the conversation between mel and her father was so sad though.. but the in lucas's arms = home part was so sweet!

its been two years and you still haven't updated! -pout-

thanks!!
righthere431
2008-06-27
ch 18,
abuseaw so cute =]
righthere431
2008-06-27
ch 17,
abusearghh i knew that lucas liked melaney... i just hope he still likes her =/
righthere431
2008-06-27
ch 16,
abusewhat? why would amelia run away? =/
righthere431
2008-06-27
ch 15,
abuseyeah its hard to comprehend if youre still friends with a person that you dont know that much anymore =/
righthere431
2008-06-27
ch 14,
abuseyeah i hope lucas accepts his mother back even though he left her =/
righthere431
2008-06-27
ch 13,
abuseim guessing that shay really cares about her =] so sweet. now who did lucas wanna see so badly? hm
righthere431
2008-06-26
ch 12,
abuseoh what happened?
righthere431
2008-06-26
ch 11,
abuse=]] hehe somethings probably gonna happen... it always does on parties =] woot woot!
righthere431
2008-06-26
ch 10,
abusepsh i bet angela is only friend with her for lucas but im glad he "announced" that he is her friend
righthere431
2008-06-26
ch 9,
abuseughh i hate it when that happens too... when a close friend of yours acts all different with other friends when youre around... ugh
righthere431
2008-06-26
ch 8,
abuseim glad theyre all made up =/ and just because bethy has a lover dont mean she can ditch melaney =/ and why does her dad have to be all secluded? arghh
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