|Reviews for The Strength of Eternity|
| iCY the Polar Kid 3/30/12 . chapter 17
Man... I can't believe I almost teared from that （；＿；）
Depressing but still awesome.
| iCY the Polar Kid 3/29/12 . chapter 16
I honestly like how you take time to focus on a person's thoughts and how undramatic life can be at times...such as Melaney being stuck at home from time to time and babysitting... I am glad it just does not focus on all that sappy love like most love stories... Despite being a hopeless romantic... Heh xD
And that sounds almost like my niece xD
She would say "mine!" when it's something she wants... But I to no avail always tell her "no, share" but it's not working since "mine" was among one of the first words ingrained in her little dictionary.. :
Anywho... Lovely chapter! Human are fickle and they can criticize it all they want... They are merely supporting the argument xD
Have a great one!
| iCY the Polar Kid 3/29/12 . chapter 15
That was a sweet chapter... But my question is... Do friends really kiss in that way? I thought they just hug xD
Anyways... I had the weirdest dream last night! It felt so real but I knew it wasn't xD
I had a dream that you replied back to my reviews which made me so ecstatic because it showed that you were still acknowledged the existence of this story. I go super happy because it meant you were going to update it... But yeah... I was only a dream xD
I hope it comes true though.
I hope you are doing well with whatever it is you are doing in life. Best wishes! o()o
| iCY the Polar Kid 3/28/12 . chapter 14
Golly I just wonder how Lucas will react when he finds out about Melaney and his mother.. Sorry for the spoilers if anyone happens to read this D:
| iCY the Polar Kid 3/28/12 . chapter 13
Whoa they what...?
Hard to see relationships like that go (T T)
| iCY the Polar Kid 3/28/12 . chapter 12
Due to my extreme lack of social settings as such... I don't tend to connect with these thing like parties because the only interpretation I get of them are from the deformed media... So it is rather interesting to me rather than connective because I have read different accounts of "party" scenes from other stories... And honestly this one seemed like the more reserved types... Even though crazy things happened xD
Wow is all I have to say about Lucas (-｡-;
| iCY the Polar Kid 3/28/12 . chapter 11
I was definitely destined to find this story and read it :D
I can live some sense of content now. Its just sad that I was not able to find out about this site and story earlier. You are an amazing writer and this is an amazing story.
Melaney seems a little bit naive in the sense that she trusts too easily at times.. But great regardless (_-)
| iCY the Polar Kid 3/28/12 . chapter 10
That last line... Killer! Heh :D!
What more can I say to that o()o
| iCY the Polar Kid 3/28/12 . chapter 9
That was uber cute and uber hilarious xD
Although I felt rather sad reading this because of the heartfelt words..
I ran out of things to say... Heh.
Still awesome though :]
| iCY the Polar Kid 3/28/12 . chapter 8
I love this chapter! Paving ways to a mended friendship :]
and you are hilarious xD
A beta :]
And yes I understand completely!
| iCY the Polar Kid 3/28/12 . chapter 7
I think the suffocating built of emotions took a toll on her and at that moment she had no regards to what was going on... Maybe. I hope they mend their broken friendship :]
| iCY the Polar Kid 3/28/12 . chapter 6
Wait, so Melaney was the one to end the friendship?
| iCY the Polar Kid 3/28/12 . chapter 5
Cute. And gosh you are incredibly intelligent.
I love the way you writing. The dialogue and timely analogies... Awesome．
| iCY the Polar Kid 3/28/12 . chapter 4
I am one who's horrible with reviews xD
For one I review the story merely because I enjoy it greatly... secondly I review because I have certain things, both positive and necessary to address about the story.
I may just be as bad as a reader as I am an aspired writer, however reading your story here seems to do some intellectual boost, heh xD!
And must I saw... if a situation like Melaney's occurred back in my high school... even the admirer of her best friend would not hold that Kristen-3confusednamed-lady back from unseething her filthy claws onto Melaney xD
But this chapter was nice regardless :]
Thank you and...
| iCY the Polar Kid 3/28/12 . chapter 3
I did not realize this until now but... this story hasn't been updated since 2005! xD!
I surely hope this is not one of those epic series where the author, under certain circumstances, doesn't ever get the chance to finish it :(
That would be sad... but I do understand that you have a life outside of writing and all but it just strikes me as saddening because as an avid reader... I can't let go of great stories like this that unfortunately authors are unable to complete.
I wish you the best with whatever it is you are doing and I hope that one day.. you'll be able to come back to finish this one :)
Wishful thinking on my part but it never hurts to hope right?
Have a great one!