WHY WHY WHY did you not finish this? ):

i love this story so much:D you are so good.

wow i guess your a first for a lot of things for me, like ive never cried two chapters in a row before from reading something on fanfiction or fictionpress and im pretty sure even from any other story/book

but seriously i realy hope that you will oneday (hopefully really soon) you will finish this story off

wow this chapter actually made me cry, like the previous ones my eyes only teared up and i could blink them away, but this time they just rolled down my face and i actually had to get up to go to the bathroom and wipe them away ...

well your amazing and i hope along with Melaney that Elivra is happy and if i were her i think i would also do everything in my power to do so too

i really wish you would finish this story but ... i guess like what Lucas said "Longing doesnt get you anywhere"

hmm the name Lucas brings back lots of memories for me, though with it brought lots of hurt and saddness for me too though not as much as Melaney but it did change me ... though to this day im not sure for the better or worse

and like i said before i really and sincerly wish with all my heart that you WILL finish this story, please and thank you

P.S. i think this is the longest review i've ever written so far, thats how touching this story and chapter are too me and without any emoticons at all not even one

you know a story is truly one of your favorites when you cry and laugh on many occasions throughout the story

i can genuinely say with all my heart that this is my favorite story ever

I JUST FOUND THIS STORY ON FICTIONPRESS AND I LOVE IT!

yes! i love this story! is it over? i hope not! I need closure!

this story is great!

i read it all in one go..

and seeing that you haven't updated for years already, i was hoping that this fic was not abandoned..

especially since there's like one more chapter left and an epilogue..

i wish you'd continue this..

please please update this soon...i'd like to read more..

and i'd really appreciate it if you finish this amazing fic of yours...

aw.. natalie and danny's best friend's story seems to be interesting.. :)

nice chapter btw..

seems that lucas and melaney's relationship turned into something a bit more complicated..

plus his mom's back?

please update son

You HAVE TO UPDATE! please. For the children.

A really nice story. I enjoyed reading it.

Well done!

Jaliy!

I really love this chapter. Touching and emotional and just beautiful (: Made me tear up.

HPRK

Fabulous. This story is great :]

OH MY GOSH! I LOVE IT! This is one of the best stories I have read. It is so great. Keep writting. :)