Pretty good, not bad. Nice flow to the song. Good job

-Jessie

Right, so the song is neither intricate nor delicate, and it neither works or makes an attempt at being reasonable. Maybe a script, but not a song.

After I heard this song, I felt like I knew you!

I could almost see you...I think you have the soul of a poet... Please, write me back, and also, lets hook up sometime!

turn it into a soap opera. It sucks as a song.

this song is da bomb! you're a really good poet, and i say that because most *good* songs start out as poems. keep it goin! sayonara, nina

*.* wow... Just Get A Clue is wonderful. It sounds like something Alanis Morisette would write. Alanis happens to be one of my fav artists! Just Get A Clue reminds me of Oughta Know by Alanis. Very good.

miray

P.S. E-mail me!

Loved it! I think you should record it! If you have a microphone that is... ;; I'll be looking for more of your songs! _*

Peace Love and Candy chibi-chan

good song. I think it is very original and would make a great song if ever recorded.