I sorta feel that way to one of my friends, very good poem. Thanks for reviewing mine.

HtW

very good, well written

please read and review my poem/story

This was amazingly written. I love the repetition you've used through the poem and can relate to the contents (kinda).

One suggestion though... perhaps make some spacing between the lines or create more than one stanza. Not to make it into some structure but simply to make it easier to read :-)

Be blessed