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| Punky Monkey 2004-01-22 ch 1,   | Hey, cool poem it flows well. I especially like the final stanza. Do what you do and do it always.. |
| mizu no kokoro 2003-12-07 ch 1, | I wish it would end X( Life sucks~ Oh well, good poem! ~Never the same~ |
| Needa S. 2003-12-07 ch 1, | Beautfully done..Keep-up the wonderful work! Thanks for your reviews. |
| cosmo-queen 2003-12-07 ch 1, | Very good poem. I liked how, at first, everything seemed hopeless but by the end of the poem, there was hope. It was an inspirational contrast. I liked the first and last stanzas the best. Good work, keep writing :) And thanks for the review :) *cosmo-queen* |
| Kodachi Wakizashi-chan 2003-12-03 ch 1, | Hi hi! Thanks for the review! Awesome poem! Very expressive and emotional. Hey...are you really depressed? Well, nice job! I'll read more sometime, but I've got lots of homework and stuff to take care of. Bye for now, K-chan |
| Storm Lunawolf 2003-11-24 ch 1, | I love this! Very well done.I love how the poem progresses until it gets to a well well thought out ending. Very good job! P.s.: Please try to read some of my stuff if you get the chance. Thanks. *~Luna~* *~ ~* |
| Waterflash 2003-11-16 ch 1, | You've always been a weird one with those words... Well what can I say other than, It's pretty good! |