 AngelaiR 2004-12-06 . chapter 1*blink blink* I don't know what to say, wow, that was... brilliant! |
 Burning Calligraphy 2004-11-20 . chapter 1Amazingly sweet. A touching story.
I am truly amazed by your imagery. In the stories I have read so far of yours, it is always vivid and realistic. There was a wonderful fantasy twist on it this time. I'm very impressed.
There were one or two grammar things, but that's about it. Other than that, wonderful.
~Sanguine~ |
 write25 2004-06-29 . chapter 1That was really great. ~Mariah |
 Alixandra 2003-12-30 . chapter 1Hey, this was cool. Kind of an eerie story, but cool. You're a good writer. Keep it up.
~Alixandra |
 Chemical Dreams 2003-12-25 . chapter 1Very, very...good. very...(please circle answer of your choice) mysterious, moving, intriguing...brilliant? anyway, it was very good, know that, even if I can't find the words to express what I'm trying to say. Well done. |
 Grunge Muffin 2003-12-23 . chapter 1Holy **. Excuse the french. Wow. That was awesome. Very original too. Never read anything along those lines before. wow. you've really impressed me. I feel so inadequate now! damn you for being brilliant! but honestly, how did you come up with that? good work! |
 peppermint-kiss 2003-12-17 . chapter 1 nice!any continuation?i hope so! |
 GoogleCorelli 2003-11-29 . chapter 1how touching...how mysterious...oh, I love it, i do... |
 aqua-angel 2003-11-16 . chapter 1*sniffle* this is the most beautiful story i have ever read. It was so sweet *sniff* very nicely written too, great job! |
 Summer Rayne 2003-11-16 . chapter 1hey girl! i love this story. i am jealous it so good. it was sad and yet happy. very well written. it kept me guessing. i think ya need to write more happier stuff :P your very good at it. *hugs* ill talk to you in like...two minutes :D ttfn.
luv ME! |
 ThePinkFlamingos 2003-11-16 . chapter 1That was a really good story. It got to the part where the glass was moving, and I was thinking "oh God, more aliens?' but this was different, and really really good. Great job!!
Abbie |