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| Militarylver4eva 2007-07-15 ch 23, | abuseHEY...I JUST WANTED TO SAY THAT I LOVED THIS STORY AND THINK THAT THIS IS WORTHY OF BEING PUBLISHED. YEP, I SAID IT... PUBLISHED. YOU COMPLETELY ASTOUNDED ME WITH YOUR STORY TELLING. I HAVE READ ALOT OF ROMANCE NOVELS IN MY SHORT TIME ON THIS PLANET AND BY FAR, I THINK THIS HAS ALOT OF POTENTIAL FOR BEING A BEST SELLER. AND NO I AM NOT BSING YOU. LOL. I TRULY MEAN IT. I BET IF YOU SENT THIS STORY TO A PUBLISHER THEY WOULD BE WILLING TO 'MAKE YOU A OFFER YOU CAN'T REFUSE'. LOL. HAD TO PUT IN THAT GODFATHER LINE. BUT I AM TOTALLY SERIOUS. I HAVE READ SOME OF YOUR STORIES AND THINK VERY HIGHLY ABOUT YOUR POTENTIAL AS A ROMANCE WRITER. ANYWAY, I REALLY WANT YOU TO COMPLETE THIS STORY. I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT TO GADI AND SEYTIE. I WANT TO KNOW NOW THAT THE SAGE AND ULRICH HAVE MET AND KNOW THAT THEY ARE BROTHER AND SISTER, WHAT HAPPENS TO TRISTAN. I KNOW THAT IT HAS BEEN OVER 2 YEARS SINCE YOU WROTE THE LAST CHAPTER BUT I AM TOTALLY DYING TO FIND OUT HOW THIS STORY IS GOING TO END. SO PLEASE DON'T KEEP ME IN SUSPENSE. PLEASE UPDATE YOUR STORIES SOON. |
| cryingelf 2006-03-19 ch 23, | abuseOMG! when are you going to update? ! yish! can't wait! |
| Light tears 2006-03-10 ch 1, | abuseWow. Very edgy. But I still love it! Now I'm going to finish reading it. But I just had to say really good so far from what I've read! Taylor. |
| BangBangYourDead 2005-12-29 ch 23, | abuseSo good. You must update. Its tres rad. ♥ |
| LAUREN 2005-12-26 ch 23, anon. | abuseFINISH YOUR STORY! PLEASE OR ILL SEND MY HUMAN-EATING-SOCKS AFTER U PLZ! {gETS ON KNEES} IM BEGGING U |
| LovelyLilDevil 2005-10-22 ch 1, | abusewow. i loved it! ive never been 2 this site, so its all a little new to me. i write Harry Potter fanfiction on a different site, so im like, used to that site. but, i liked this story. im one of those suckers for romantic stories, and this one definitly sounds a little romantic!! well, i got to go keep reading!! |
| Aurora-Heart 2005-07-13 ch 23, anon. | abuseno! u cnt leave it like that! when r u gona update the last chapter? i wana c wut happens! what does seytie do? who does she choose? will gadi n tristan fight? will gadi take seytie away again? or will she stay with ulrich? or will ulrich come back with gadi, sage, and seytie? but where does that leave tristan? come on u hav to post rsvp! |
| charmed03 2005-06-09 ch 22, | abuseomg! i LOVE this story! i've read your other stories as well, and i must say, i'm quite a fan! anywayz, wow! this story's really good, even though you don't like it! hehe. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let seytie stay with tristan! i like him better! for some reason he sounds hotter and definitely nicer! kill gadi or something... update SOON! it's summer, and there's no school, so update! |
| LiNdSaY.AP 2005-05-15 ch 22, | abuseso this is comment #2, since i decided i had more to say: can't wait to read your pharaoh story. i LOVE egypt and all. and you have 212 reviews for this! that's WAY more than i've EVER had with all my pennames and their stories put together! |
| LiNdSaY.AP 2005-05-15 ch 23, | abuseEXCUSE ME? did you just write off that you think this story isn't good? this is one of my ultimate FAVORITES on this entire website! it is NOT crappy, and it is NOT a 'wannabe romance'. this is very good work, and it does have potential, and i really REALLY want to read more of it, it's just got me all wrapped up. and i say you're lucky you can spend 2 years on a story. i think i've maybe finished one of mine, and it took me...maybe 3 years? and i'm still disappointed with it...anyway, you best not remove this or anything. I MUST READ MORE! |
| blacksunrise 2005-05-14 ch 23, anon. | abuseaww it;'s not that bad ...well ok maybe it is but hey it worksyou've done good continue::pats shoulder:: |
| EYpark0623 2005-04-24 ch 23, anon. | abusewow, i like yur story... but WOW... yur gonna have a funked up ending... well i hope yu'll have fun with it... |
| becxfok01 2005-04-23 ch 22, | abuseOh my gosh. This is a really good story. I don't like Seytie's personality one hundred percent, because he really caused more trouble than good and very indecisive. I do feel very sorry for the two men, esp Tristan. Pls pls end the story with a sort of happy ending. I know it obviously can't be the typical happy one, but let her be with Tristan! And the two children of hers sound wonderful and mature. They even seem more mature than Seytie is! Anyways, pls finish the story soon! |
| green n yellow fish 2005-04-23 ch 16, | abusewow. loving this story. |
| Desert Illusion 2005-04-22 ch 23, anon. | abuseHahah! You had me laughing at the title of this A/N! LOL! Aw! Thanx for listening to me! YAY! I finally get SOMEONE to do something that I want! *beams at you* Heheh! Anyways, yeah, I'll be so looking forward to the next chapter and 'not-the-end chapter!' *grins* Loved that little line! :P Anyways, you don't have to be up ALL NIGHT LONG! LOL! Just take it easy, and umm, just let your mind flow, and do the things I told you to do previously in our chat! I'm sure you'll do fine! You're a great author! You know what you're doing. And THIS STORY IS NOT CRAP! LOL! How can you say that!? If it was...do you think it would get nominated? *answers NO for you* Yeah, my point exactly! *grins* Anyways, YOU GO GIRL! You'll do fine with the next few chapters! Look how good your other stories ended! I'll be waiting...in the most impatent manner for your next update! LOL! Take care! Love ya loads too!-Maha. |