Hey i can tell this is going to be a good story. Keep on updating. :)

Hey- really cool idea for a story, and I love how it's written so far! I like all the different places these guys go (but there's not enough drama!). Makes me jealous- wish I'd thought of it... Anyway, keep it up!

Yes Nicole- add a sympathy pat there. The restaurant sounds like AppleBees. So ARE we gonna ride donkey's? And what exactly is my bf doing at the hotel?!

“So, who was it?” I asked while keeping my eyes locked on the card game Nate and (had) invited me to join into.
look at this sentence. there is just one word in it. lol i have to read ALL of it soon. lol. u r a really good writer.

please write more!

hey nicole when are you gonna update?

WRITE MORE!
katie

*cough, cough HACK!* sry had to get the fluff out of my throat. Good job, another scary chapter in our sad lives about scary things. I can actually see Megan goin with u and pat. Just to make sure you guys didn't do anything along the way. AGH! NO! MENTAL CONNECTION WITH MEGAN!

hey great story definatly continue this one its great...Fate

y not? I'm bored. Hurry up and finish the next chappie!