whoa, this is kinda crazy, a brother would kill an actor because his sister had a crush and made her cry?!?! geez he is a little not there in the mind or something...?

*claps*
Bravo!
I'm not reading it again on here because I already have!
I still love it!

Ew! That first chapter was such crap! How could the first part be so bad and the second part so good?

I love the second chapter, but the first one made my eyes bleed.

Alex

(PS. I am the author of the first chapter. lol! no worries, I'm not insulting Miss Riley's awesome writing, only my own...horrible...horrible stuff)

Wow. That was so bloody amazing! I was crying! Amazing.

*doesn't even bother reading it because she knows how it goes and doesn't feel like making herself cry for the third time today*

i love it...erm...and...yeah...i will add this to my favorite stories deals now...er..yeah...lol

It's so sad.

Wow this is very sad...it is really depressing. I am definitly interested to see what happens next...nice job.

Holy crap! That was amazing! Bloody hell... that was brilliant!

:O this has connections to hp! hey i didn't know that. that's interesting to put in creative idea =) you should say there's something from hp in here on the summary you might get more hits iono just a thought

review my story if you get the chance it's called "protector"
~k8

Wow. I was close to tears in that. That was amazing! Bloody brilliant. Well done, you are a terriffic author.