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Misoshiru 2008-05-05 ch 4,	abuseWow it's been a while huh? I remember how much this story used to crack me up :D Hopefully you update a bit more often :P
Amanda 2006-11-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseCute. I thought that the part with Maggie poking him for money was hilarious. Never thought I'd like a Western... guess you changed my mind. The characterizations are cool too. ^__^
Tempergurl 2004-12-26 ch 1,	abuseBetta hurry up and update missy! i know it has been almost a year but I am new to this site and I really like your story so far. ya wanna update now don't ya? Really good and can't wait for the next chapter
steinbock 2004-09-21 ch 3,	abusei LOVE this story! keep it up! i'd love to write westerns, and aw heck any other good fic, i dont spose u (or anyone else) could give me an idea...
Talimkun 2004-04-04 ch 3,	abuseWow.. a chappie dedicated to me?? I feel so special! and it was such a great chapter that ALL THE CHAPTERS SHOULD ME DEDICATED TO ME MWAHAHAH! hehehe sorry... just had to have my insane moment there... Anyways.. omg i love this story! It makes me laugh i mean... just the fact that this big tough cowboy guy James (hottie by the way haha) and this rugged girl being stuck together.. i mean its hillarious! and very sweet... the part that i really cracked up at is when james said that all he had was his horse left hehehe... for some reason that just made me bust out laughing. Omg you have to update soon okay? I will torture you untill you do!! by the way, im sorry for the late review. Hope you light a fire under your behind and write more hehe. lites up a matchmwahahaha BYE -WITH MUCH LOVE TALIM =O)
Celtic Nightmare 2004-04-03 ch 3, anon.	abuseOoh..I Like. Maggie's Deffinately Got An Attitude That Creates The entire Story. Absolutely Splendid. I Do Hope You'll Continue It I'm Anxious To See Just Who Maggie turns Out To Be.
Loki Mischeif-Maker 2004-02-25 ch 1,	abuseWow. Cool story. The discription is good, and it really draws you in-- the detail about James's green eyes was inspired!-- and you charcterization is pretty good too. I found it interesting how Maggie didn't even know here name. . . . The only bad thing I can say is the way that the POV jumps around a little. . . . it gets a little confusing about who you're speaking through. However, the story itself is wonderful. Cheers! PS thanks for the review.
Sandy 2004-02-21 ch 3, anon.	abuseHey, I hope u r going to add another chapter soon, or I am going to pull my hair out in insantity because I don't know what happens next!
GreyRose 2004-02-21 ch 3,	abuseSince you were so kind as to leave me such a wonderful review, I felt obligated to read some of your stories as well. ^^ And boy, was it worth it! I love the way you started this story out, with Maggie poking the unconscious James in the street. It caught my attention right away and made me giggle. In fact, I laughed quite a lot while reading this. You are quite adept at writing humor. And I LOVE the characters so far. hugs Elysium Usually situations such as this would strike me as cliche'd, but you've managed to keep it fresh and entertaining. I love it! (And since I'm not a fan of Westerns, that's saying something.)
writerforever 2004-02-06 ch 3,	abuseHi! This is a great story. It is hilarious and very good! I can't wait to read chapter 4.
Sepulchral 2004-02-06 ch 3,	abuseThis is great! I love the characters and everything. Just one thing: Maggie had hazel eyes in ch. 1 and then in ch. 2 she had blue ones. Other than that, keep it coming!
WildAngels 2004-02-03 ch 3,	abuseYour story is soo good! I love it! please write more youve got me hooked on it!!
Misoshiru 2004-01-28 ch 3,	abuseI thought i reviewed ur story ages ago! Gah i dunno, I remeber readin it though, update soon pllease
Shadowz the Silver Wolf 2004-01-21 ch 3,	abuseThis is a really good story and I realy like reading it ^_^ Plz, plz, plz, plz, PLZ write more soon coz it's a really good story! ^_^ P.S. Thanx for the review.
TakingBackLostTime 2004-01-21 ch 1,	abuseHey there!! O YAY! I knew you'd be back! OKie, thanks for reviewing (again) on my new story, i REALLY appreciate it! okie now onto your story: Do you know how many times i have read this? i've read it about ten times and then just when im about to hit that damn review button i get distracted or i have to go..so here i am, typing as fast as my little fingers can handle so i can get this review done! And to make it better, everytime i've read this, i've never gotten sick of it! (thats a great thing by the way!) okie! your characters: VERy interestingly created! i LOVE them! Maggie and James do interest me a whole lot, and i cant wait to see what will happen. neways, im off now.. to read the next to chappies. . . again! hehe Keep up the excellent work dude! ~~*~~Kentzkid

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