good poem, i like when someone puts a twist on a "normal" tradition (or whatever you want to call it). Also, thank you for the review. I just want to say however, that when i used the phrase "taking that dive", i meant it literally: like in diving into a pool or lake. Thanks again for the review and great poem!

NO I AM STAR!
*star runs to the corner to cry*
Sorry bout that star is emotional.
It was good.