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Lady Katreina 2008-10-05 ch 13,	abuseOh my gosh. I'd like to use oodles of swear words to describe how amazing your story is- I'd also like to shake my fist at you that you haven't finished because NOW I HAVE to review, it'd be cruel if I didn't but my GOSH it's good- but I can't think of any right now. Talk about wonderful! Oh wow. It, once it hit me around oh chapter 12, that this story is very similar to a Asian drama -Devil Beside You- in such a deliciously wonderful hint-of-a way that I didn't notice it until chapter 12. I love both Tia and Jae and how they think. You're so god! THANK YOU SO MUCH! IT'S SO AMAZING I CAN'T THINK OF THE CORRECT WORDS TO DESCRIBE IT'S AMAZINGNESS!!
Lia 2008-10-03 ch 13, anon.	abuseSo wonderful to see that you updated. For a tough guy Jae gets sick too easily. Love interaction between Jae and Tia. He's really starting to fall for her. Sin sounds positively insane. Can't wait for more :)
Captain Charleigh 2008-08-24 ch 13, anon.	abuseOh my gosh, you can't do this to me! Today is august 24th. I have sat here and read the entire story for the first time in prolly 2 hours. It says you haven't updated in two months. Please...PLEASE...please...Update soon. I need to know what happens. There will be cookies and pies and cakes and all sorts of yummy goods for you (at your local market) when you update!
Cristale 2008-08-22 ch 13, anon.	abuseUm Question...why dont i remember this...did you change the story!?! cuz i remember an ending and so does my friend...i was rereading it! so confused...:(
Sarahj259 2008-08-14 ch 13,	abuseawesome storyness! Update soon!
Nicole 2008-08-06 ch 13, anon.	abuseI love this story so much! Please update soon!! :)
choc me 2008-07-29 ch 3,	abuseHi! I'm impatiently waiting for the next chapter! I think I've been counting the days since ur last update! I've read this fic a couple of times and although I like it very much, there's something which I wanted to comment on: you switch tenses sometimes (I'm not talking abt dialogues). It sounds ok when u switch from past to the present tense because it's been written in the first person, but it would sound more awkward in the 3rd person. I think you should stick to the past tense throughout, but in case I'm wrong, maybe u could confirm that.
Rissa 2008-07-25 ch 13, anon.	abusedude, you rock my world! the chap was extrmely funny! keep it up! and plz dont take a year to update, some of us are waiting on fire! cheers
El desconocido 2008-07-22 ch 2,	abuseThis, sweetheart, is the best peice i've read in years. (considering ive been on fanfiction and fiction press for the last four years, all day, thats saying quite alot.) An update would be much appreciated. XD ~ The Stranger
Lady of Confusion 2008-07-20 ch 13,	abuseITS GREAT! I LOVE IT!...JAE IS MY FAVORITE...even though he's a little crazy...he cant help it! ...lol...TIA ROCKS TOO!... UPDATE ASAP!
raped by a female bunni 2008-07-19 ch 13,	abuseomg if u dont update soon i will sue!
kailahboo12 2008-07-16 ch 13,	abuseInteresting turn of plot.
Amarantha Raine 2008-07-10 ch 13,	abuseI loved this chapter. It was really cute. I think the rain scene was good . I like how you spelled out all the details. (I got interrupted in the middle tho so maybe I didn't get the full effect...still good tho!) Maybe because there's so much time between each chapter I read, but I never really found it plausible that Tia hated Jae even tho she always thinks about how much she hates him. Keep writing! Can't wait till the next chapter! Raine (formerly Bella L. Rose)
twentytwentysurgery 2008-07-10 ch 13,	abuseUgh. And just when I thought it was actually going to continue...well c'mon! Please update! It's such a good story with such a good cliffy! And did I mention that I love the fact that someone is not afraid to use gore on fiction press? I kow-tow to you (if that is even how you spell it). The POV's are amazing because they each are realistic. Keep it up and update soon! Or, you could update now, which would be rather nice. Like a little priest pie.
A 2008-07-03 ch 13, anon.	abuseI'm really excited that you updated and I'm loving the Tia/Jae interaction. Yay! Please please please update as soon as possible! I'll be waiting. =)

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