Cool! I liked this chapter, good job! I'm looking forward to the next one!

i like it a lot...it's very good. i think my favorite character is Kaki. ^_^ she seems very sweet.

Why aren't you updating this? It's a great story, one which I'm really looking forward to the next chapter to. Please update.

Great story, sounds like it will be good once you finish it.

You really should accept annonomous reviews you know. Great chapter, I really liked it! This is starting to pick up.
Jake: I want a magical amulet that has mystical powers! All I have is this staff...*Hits staff on ground, causing a beam of light to shoot up into the air, singing him* ...ow.
Me: Right...I don't think you NEED one...great chapter! Bye!

Very good story! ^^ Continue!^^'

This is really good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Jake: But the details of the enviroment are somewhat lacking. For all I know, she was standing in a white void.

Oh give it a rest. This was only really the prologue. You don't need that many details in a prologue.

Jake: *Leans on his staff* ...that poor wizard...wonder if she was pretty?

*Falls over* ...eh...heh heh...don't mind him, I'm just looking forward to the next chapter.

(Oh,and Jake is a light-mage if you're wondering.) Okay, bye!

Great beginning, good plot.