my heart don't feel so alone < maybe it should be my heart doesn't feel so alone.. and if you're looking for a title maybe you could use "With the Beats of my Heart"... Its good tho, I feel the emotion, way to write, keep it up

Brillant! Absolutly brillant! I love it! So sweet and I love the last line, 'for you my heart and soul I bare and with this a kiss I seal' it's beautiful. Tres bein! Keep writing wicked brillant! Laters!

~Sammy