Wow! This one says a lot. I like it.

wow...i liked it. it was truthful (no matter how many people don't want it to be), it was sad, it told a story and i liked it. good job.

Woah. Freakish. But good. I like it.

Very poignant... You have a very lyrical flow to your writing, and I think this is a fantastic example of a very gentle protest poem. Wonderful writing and very beautiful.

Again I say... WOW! You have a knack for writing, I loved this one. It was even better than Saturday Night Movie, which was pure genius. I really like your writing style... I will definitely read more in the future.
'Slayer

::mouth drops open::

A.) Reminds me of BNL's "Fell Asleep At the Wheel" song, so that's a bonus.

B.) Very morbid, so of course you're getting points for that.

3.) Rhyming is fun for all.

Great job, Chuck.