This is good! There should be more poems on Manic Depression. If you want to improve, you could stay more focused and talk about the feelings. Besides that, great!

that was wicked, i liked the bit with the birdie wing, Leah, buddy,pal,chum, i've sent you a song, the western one.
you could try and give it a bit more rythm, it went from like 4 syllables, then the next minute it's got like 27!
what's with that? but it's really cool, is it about Anton, when you said' am i a slapper' because you said today you thought he thought you were. but i don't mean to split you up, i'm just saying.