Well, after partaking in my habit of clicking away at my favorites and then clicking on other people's favorites when looking for something to read, I found this poem. Anywhoo, it's very nice, but the only real thing that's wrong hear is you use the word "Us" at the end of a sentence four times, which is a bit repetetive, and quite possibly the smallest error I've ever noticed.

this is an amazing peice, i very much enjoyed it, i know i can relate to this, i really like peices about masks cause it's something i like ot write about, and i love to see how others portray it, i really like the way you did, great work keep it up! thanx for the review

Strange, yet so true. Which makes it sad. Why do we do these things to ourselves?!?

Very good, and oh so true...I like how you said...Our masks will have consumed us
...veery cool