um...Ty?...did I ever tell you that you are my idol?...well anyway you are...your words inspire, and drive me to write better...this poem just proves how much talent you have. Keep writing~KS

That is truely amazing! I love how you make me feel what she is feeling! I've only experienced it from the other point of view. This is an awesome poem! Keep it up!

The Girl Across the Hall

Aww, that is sad. [tear] I liked how eveything fit. Ya know, like every word clicked. Damn, wish i could do that. >.< Oh well. Maybe i will be able to some time soon. I hope... Well anyways, great write. Bye!

Later.

~darkevening~