Cute. Shows true friendship. A pack of lies and a heart of truth. Nice. ^.^

I really, really liked your poem. I think the flow a little rough at certain points but the idea is amazingly wonderful. It was touching and still wasn't corny like a whole bunch of other poems about friendship. So on that front really impressive. Keep writing!
Me.
--To the borders of infinity and beyond...--

I like this poem a lot. it really shows how complex friendships can be. Great job. Your a great writer. Please review back!