   Stefen 2004-07-14 . chapter 1Aww! That's adorable! Hehehe! Yay! |
 ola 2004-01-03 . chapter 1err, that was a bit weird, but nice =) |
 Chainlinks 2003-12-29 . chapter 1*giggle* That was just so adorable! |
 Gitanjali 2003-12-18 . chapter 1Cute! I seem to condense your stories into one syllable words, don't I? But this really is cute, and I like it a lot. I like the way you use second person. It really integrates the reader. :) |
 fleur 2003-12-11 . chapter 1 Actually, not enough clothes? That's more like hypothermia. You can only catch a cold from a virus. Sure if it is cold out, your immune system weakens but you cannot catch a cold just from being outsidelike that. |
| Honeywell 2003-11-29 . chapter 1 Cute! |
 Nightmare Wolf 2003-11-26 . chapter 1Aw..That is extremely cute. |
FictionPress.com - let the words flow