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| Stefen 2004-07-14 ch 1,  | abuseAww! That's adorable! Hehehe! Yay! |
| ola 2004-01-03 ch 1, | abuseerr, that was a bit weird, but nice =) |
| Chainlinks 2003-12-29 ch 1, | abuse*giggle* That was just so adorable! |
| Gitanjali 2003-12-18 ch 1, | abuseCute! I seem to condense your stories into one syllable words, don't I? But this really is cute, and I like it a lot. I like the way you use second person. It really integrates the reader. :) |
| fleur 2003-12-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseActually, not enough clothes? That's more like hypothermia. You can only catch a cold from a virus. Sure if it is cold out, your immune system weakens but you cannot catch a cold just from being outsidelike that. |
| Honeywell 2003-11-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseCute! |
| Nightmare Wolf 2003-11-26 ch 1, | abuseAw..That is extremely cute. |