I'm too impressed to even think of something rational. Good, as usual.

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Good Goddess.

How can you say so much in so few words?

*is insanely jealous*

I loved the last line, it brought a really tragic and meaningful message on its own. But it benefits the whole poem in itself.. Great job!

Lidless Eye

huh.. ::reads agian.. and a third time::.. i think i like it.. definately leaves an interesting image in place...

Hum, I like it, I like it. Even though it's kinda complecated. But I do like it, great work.

Keep it goin!

Peace ouT