|Reviews for Outcast|
| Sarpedon 12/13/03 . chapter 1
nice. be better if there was more, but for 4 lines, its really good. agree with SweetGrape- liked the last line and thought it to be something to do with suicide.
| NuttyGummy 12/7/03 . chapter 1
Short and very sad, but still good.
You did a good job.
| SweetGrape 11/19/03 . chapter 1
Could be expanded- so far, it's standard and too broad. It's a good base though.
Last line could mean no future past this, or could mean suicide, so that is an interesting idea.
| Museworks 11/18/03 . chapter 1
Short, but it makes its point.
Nice tidbit of work!