nice. be better if there was more, but for 4 lines, its really good. agree with SweetGrape- liked the last line and thought it to be something to do with suicide.
Sarpedon x

Short and very sad, but still good.
You did a good job.

Could be expanded- so far, it's standard and too broad. It's a good base though.

Last line could mean no future past this, or could mean suicide, so that is an interesting idea.

Short, but it makes its point.

Nice tidbit of work!

-Museworks