Very despearate. It somewhat, very slightly, reminds me of "Why?" on mine, but again very diffrent also. I find it strange how we seem to write about similar things. But, I have read so little, and you have written so much. Good job on this, I am off to read more.
Val

Is that an oxymoron I see! Magnificent!

I can really identify with this right now. Great poem.

Great poem. I loved it.

Oh. Wow. I like this. Very strong images, conveying the emtions to the reader extremely well.

wow, this poem was amazing...i just loved it...it was so cold, so sad, so smothering with its dark and consuming aura. amazing. the expressions you used were great. this is going on my favs...hopefully i have room lol...great work, i loved it, kudos!

WOW! The memory of a love one!