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| Needa S 2004-01-17 ch 1, | abuseGreat job for your first piece. Keep up the awesome work. Thanks for the review. |
| Keep it 100 2003-11-26 ch 1, | abuseFor one of your first attempts, this is really good. ~Heart of the Sword |
| Hail the Warrior 2003-11-26 ch 1, | abuseVery good, liked the last stanza, extremely powerful. *faves* |
| Alyx Bradford 2003-11-19 ch 1, | abuse"The serpent's head was smashed The holy cross was raised" Good to see that antiquated prejudices are still in place today, though I somehow doubt you quite grasp the significance of the symbolism you used. It escapes many who embrace it. Simplistic poem. Neither unique nor inventive, and thus not particularly memorable, either. |
| soulful*actress 2003-11-18 ch 1, | abuseso, so true: i just feel sry that half the world as we know it goes: Jesus who? Real sad, how peple wont rely on him. Anyway (sry, i just got back frum church and feel the need to do something truly meanigful in life). But, hey, im done. |