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Reviews For: The Silent Tear
Isca 2008-06-01 . chapter 1
Touching. I'm sure the family of that girl would have been stunned by the beauty of this poem.
Getuie 2005-03-12 . chapter 1
So, so sad, but beautiful.
Edraith 2004-08-13 . chapter 1
Beautiful and touching. The soft, tender tone encompasses both the grief of the mourners and the compassion of the speaker. Lovely job.
Paula 2004-07-19 . chapter 1
This is a beautifully written poem which captures Chloe's spirit very well as well as our family's pain. Thank you for bringing a vision of Chloe to me.
Chloe's mom
Josh Oppenheimer 2004-02-27 . chapter 1
So you must have gone to bigelow too... the one in Massachusets? i went there! now ur in high skool... newton north i presume. yeah... i was close friends with chloe and i miss her... great poem
Deana Bell 2004-01-17 . chapter 1
Beautiful and tragic.
~God bless~
Keep it 100 2003-11-26 . chapter 1
Beautiful tribute.


~Heart of the Sword
Iski 2003-11-19 . chapter 1
After reading your religious spree (^_^) this was a new idea. All very very good. You are such a good poet! I have trouble with free verse, myself. Keep writing, if biking is an inspiration! (It's one for me too...one of those "pondering activities" as I call them, along with knitting, showering, and thinking right before you fall asleep). *sigh* You're such a good writer! *works diligently on story*...as if...
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