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| Isca 2008-06-01 ch 1, | abuseTouching. I'm sure the family of that girl would have been stunned by the beauty of this poem. |
| Getuie 2005-03-12 ch 1, | abuseSo, so sad, but beautiful. |
| Edraith 2004-08-13 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful and touching. The soft, tender tone encompasses both the grief of the mourners and the compassion of the speaker. Lovely job. |
| Paula 2004-07-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a beautifully written poem which captures Chloe's spirit very well as well as our family's pain. Thank you for bringing a vision of Chloe to me. Chloe's mom |
| Josh Oppenheimer 2004-02-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo you must have gone to bigelow too... the one in Massachusets? i went there! now ur in high skool... newton north i presume. yeah... i was close friends with chloe and i miss her... great poem |
| Deana Bell 2004-01-17 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful and tragic. ~God bless~ |
| Keep it 100 2003-11-26 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful tribute. ~Heart of the Sword |
| Iski 2003-11-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseAfter reading your religious spree (^_^) this was a new idea. All very very good. You are such a good poet! I have trouble with free verse, myself. Keep writing, if biking is an inspiration! (It's one for me too...one of those "pondering activities" as I call them, along with knitting, showering, and thinking right before you fall asleep). *sigh* You're such a good writer! *works diligently on story*...as if... |