Touching. I'm sure the family of that girl would have been stunned by the beauty of this poem.

So, so sad, but beautiful.

Beautiful and touching. The soft, tender tone encompasses both the grief of the mourners and the compassion of the speaker. Lovely job.

This is a beautifully written poem which captures Chloe's spirit very well as well as our family's pain. Thank you for bringing a vision of Chloe to me.
Chloe's mom

So you must have gone to bigelow too... the one in Massachusets? i went there! now ur in high skool... newton north i presume. yeah... i was close friends with chloe and i miss her... great poem

Beautiful and tragic.
~God bless~

Beautiful tribute.


~Heart of the Sword

After reading your religious spree (^_^) this was a new idea. All very very good. You are such a good poet! I have trouble with free verse, myself. Keep writing, if biking is an inspiration! (It's one for me too...one of those "pondering activities" as I call them, along with knitting, showering, and thinking right before you fall asleep). *sigh* You're such a good writer! *works diligently on story*...as if...