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| Anyone 2006-06-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood start, but you should continue |
| mystic-georgia 2006-04-13 ch 1,  | abuseAfter the past 39 comments - now 40, you don't think you should carry on with this? Hehe. Good job, and please update, I love your stories and it's ashame if you leave this one all alone, open and ready for you to pounce on it. Oh well, lol.See yah around. -= peace out =- |
| c12f 2006-01-25 ch 1, | abuseits awesome. I think you should really continue on it, as you've got some really nice starting points (The world is going to end and the lottery numbers) Great Job! |
| The Green Knight 2005-11-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great piece of writing! You're going on my favorite authors list and this story is going on my favorite stories list! Bravo! Be assured that if I had found anything amiss in this story I would have commented on it. I didn't. This story is solidly written and I hope you'll write more. |
| obsidian-ink 2005-08-07 ch 1, | abuseI really like the idea behind it, and it would be nice to see the story followed up. |
| TookyToucan 2005-07-25 ch 1, | abusevery tantalizing... it's well written, and i'd like to see it continued, though this is looking doubtful considering the update date... but you have so many reviews! you should totally update if so much interest has been shown! |
| Boogerbloo 2005-07-10 ch 1, | abusei definitely think that you should continue, this is very well though, i wish i could write as good as you. Keep it up! |
| Destiny 2005-05-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseAmazing! You must continue. You can't write something so great, so...(sighs) and then just not continue. It leaves everyone in a lurch and it's not a lurch that anyone would like. |
| hotsauce6548 2005-05-15 ch 1, | abuseHmm, that's interesting. Nice idea and nice flow to the story. That's all I can really say, besides saying I thik you should continue! |
| Antiplaid 2005-04-04 ch 1, | abuseVery, very nice. I've read stories like this before but you do it with a preticular style that makes it seem like something out of a novel instead of a one shot story. I'd like to see more of this. |
| Emerald Serpentt 2005-03-09 ch 1, | abuseDespite being a fan of open endings, personally I think this one's just begging to be continued. ^_^ It certainly works well enough the way it is, but... it's tantalizing, damnit. |
| Rain 2005-03-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseTime loops are such an interesting plot device! I'd like you to continue this. Nice as it is open ended, I'd love to see where you plan on taking it and how David's character develops.Excellent beginning though. |
| Zeb-the-Great 2005-02-17 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was great. A very short but complicated story. I liked the ending a lot. You just made my day with this brilliant piece of writing, thanks a bunch buddy. |
| Abandoned by Muses 2005-01-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is really cool! i hope you update this! |
| Ragade 2004-12-30 ch 1, | abuseGreat amazing, short, simple, sweet, yet deep and expanding. I certianly hope you continue off of this, It feels that the man is right, he is reliving life... |