|Reviews for Poems|
| Lady Laiered 12/23/03 . chapter 8
This was great! And it rhymed without being forced. The meter was dead on.
One silly question it's been in two of your poems. What on earth is a gannet? (other than a seabird, obviously.)
| Lady Laiered 12/23/03 . chapter 7
Beautiful imagery. I loved it.
| Lady Laiered 12/23/03 . chapter 6
Too blunt a form for such a complex issue. Overly simplified, I think.
| Lady Laiered 12/23/03 . chapter 5
A simple review for a poem that's simply fabulous.
| Lady Laiered 12/23/03 . chapter 4
I'm assuming these were intended to be five haikus that were merely victims of the odd formatting of fp.c
Simply I don't know if they're "true haiku" form-wise, but they're wonderful little capsules that I very much enjoyed reading.
| Lady Laiered 12/23/03 . chapter 3
That last line "It is amazing
how stars change for beautiful
people, don't you think?" and the "Fancy that." detract from what is otherwise an interesting super-short story that points out what fairytales seem to be trying to tell us that all that matters is the superficial things. Insightful, but I'd like it better if the end were a little different.
| Lady Laiered 12/23/03 . chapter 2
M, I don't think I like this one much. It's rather odd, seemingly without any point. Intersting, but poorly developed.
| Lady Laiered 12/23/03 . chapter 1
OMG! ROTFLOL! (Lots more exclamation points)
Some of the rhyming's a bit weird, but overall GREAT! Original, and actually humorous!
| goopygoop 11/22/03 . chapter 16
...more assignments for school?
| goopygoop 11/22/03 . chapter 14
...wow. This poem has a different mood. First the myriad forms of the gannet, and then a massacre. Great.
| goopygoop 11/22/03 . chapter 13
Gannet! Gannet! What does it mean? What IS it? I know not! I do not know! Oh, know is me!...I mean, woe.
It's nice, but...I WISH I KNEW WHAT A GANNET IS. Kyargh.
| goopygoop 11/22/03 . chapter 11
For some reason, this poem reminds me of something Arthurian. I can't quite place it, and I'm sure I'm wrong to make a connection, but that's what I'm thinking of. ?
| goopygoop 11/22/03 . chapter 8
M, nice. Although I still don't know quite what a gannet is.
| goopygoop 11/22/03 . chapter 6
Was this a school assignment?
And I'm not reviewing every single poem, only the ones that merit some other response than "I like it, keep writing." I would never say that, lest I rot, decompose and then die.
| goopygoop 11/22/03 . chapter 1
Oh, this is funny. I laughed.