*evil chortling*

reading this story, I thought I detected some homophobia. Do you have something against gay people? You seem to try make fun of the main character (the nerd) by saying that he is gay. You also seem to suggest that his interest in a girl's writing is somehow wrong, that falling in love through conventional means is more acceptable. Maybe I read it wrong, but I would like an explanation. This parody offended me quite a bit.

OMG! that was a little disturbing but okay. it was hilarious too. plz review some of my stuff

HAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAAHA im dying. oh god.

That was so. gross.
All the same, it made me laugh. You know, most guys (myself included) are somewhat afraid of writing about homosexual relationship. So, you're the bravest ;]
Sometimes we all just need to write some lame crap.
Good luck.

wow. this is really sick. lol.

OMG, this was HILARIOUS...but as you pointed out, disgusting. It definitely didn't have the ending I was expecting which would've been the original ending. So now that I've had a good laugh, I have to go to school and be boring al day long, but I'll just crack up in the middle of class, thinking about this story!

Ha, ha...I applaud you for doing this...that was pretty funny! I've read the original, although, I have to admit that I preferred this one to the original...no offence to the author of the original if you happen to be reading this review!

Anyway, I've read some of your other works too...interesting little mind you have there! Although, I have to disagree with you about the whole women taking over the world thing...could you live in a world full of men?

So, congrats on making a great parody out of a great piece!

all of that was err... interesting.

Jen

(To other readers/ authors who read this parody,)

It's original was heinously twisted, completely deformed and sourly degenerated by this fiction.

I applaud the author for making a dang incredible parody with such an exceptional style and workmanship. Y’all should too.

It's funny! At least it was to me. Hecks, my tummy hurts. :((

(To the author,)

I wasn’t being sarcastic and I meant no offense, but that was just how I saw the parody. And had you not made it thus, it would’ve been truly banal.

(For those interested in reading the non-parody fiction,)

http://w.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1446642

Dear heavens! "faints because a pan just came out of the screen hitting me bull's eye"

I do not know what to think, and I do not know what to say anymore.

But hecks...

Let me see the next chapter (lol)

Well shiver me timbre and dear gad olmighty!

Is it me story? It sure ain't, but dash me sockets, it's a parody of it!

I must say, I'm VERY VERY flattered to have one of my critics/readers do a parody of one of my fictions.

And you're doing a fine job of it!*_*