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| Covetous 2004-02-28 ch 1, | Dude, I love your poems! I have a special place in my heart for eyes: they're so expressive, it's just amazing if you think about it. 'Black tides so frightening!' Oh, I love it. Black eyes are by far my favourite, though I myself have blue. Actually, I've written a story called Dark Eyes under my non-slashy persona Dream-beguiled, if you ever feel inclined to check it out. In any case, keep up the great poetry! |
| Hacker Of Reality 2004-01-20 ch 1, | Very nice imagery |
| Lonely Jaguar 2003-12-14 ch 1, | Nice rhyming scheme. I really like the choice of words used to rhyme with each other. My favorite line(s): Brown eyes, met with blue, Captivating, something new, Returning, to start again. Great poem, keep up the good work! |
| Wren Craven 2003-11-18 ch 1, | i really liked the rhythm, the word choice, the rhyme...all in all, i loved it! it's so sweet and romantic, and wow! i just really loved it! keep up the amazing work! if you get the chance, please read and review my stuff too...chloe carpenter |