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Reviews For: Mysterious Eyes

Covetous
2004-02-28
ch 1,
Dude, I love your poems! I have a special place in my heart for eyes: they're so expressive, it's just amazing if you think about it. 'Black tides so frightening!' Oh, I love it. Black eyes are by far my favourite, though I myself have blue. Actually, I've written a story called Dark Eyes under my non-slashy persona Dream-beguiled, if you ever feel inclined to check it out. In any case, keep up the great poetry!
Hacker Of Reality
2004-01-20
ch 1,
Very nice imagery
Lonely Jaguar
2003-12-14
ch 1,
Nice rhyming scheme.
I really like the choice of words used to rhyme with each other.
My favorite line(s):
Brown eyes, met with blue,
Captivating, something new,
Returning, to start again.
Great poem, keep up the good work!
Wren Craven
2003-11-18
ch 1,
i really liked the rhythm, the word choice, the rhyme...all in all, i loved it! it's so sweet and romantic, and wow! i just really loved it! keep up the amazing work! if you get the chance, please read and review my stuff too...chloe carpenter
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