wow...

i love this story! write more!

i especially like the way it's italian and oohh the guys sound so hot !

please write more!

this is a really good story! I like it a lot! It is well written! It somehow reminds me of somehting, but I can't think of it.Oh! And why do they hate the Sanchez family? That is what has been yanking on my mind! Well, very nicely written! Keep it up!

That's IT?! What a tease...

nice

Please write more...

It's really interesting...

Sort of like West Side Story-ish,

Except Better!!

This one is great so far! I love the spanish dialogue and stuff (because I am spanish myself) and alejandro sounds really sweet. I know how u feel about the italics and stuff mine doesnt appear either! Curse the uploaders! Or rather just deal with what you got. Heheheh cool story, i luv it and definitely want more! ttfn

I loved this story! Keep going. Your plot and character decriptions are awsome. The dialouge is great. Everything is great.

i really like it! just the spanish thing is getting annoying how you translate right after...

I like this story too...pretty please update it soon!
As for the italics, etc. when you save it, you can try two things: 1) go to view and select web page, or 2) go to file, save as, then in the drop down menu, select web page...but that's what I do and I have Microsoft Word...It depends on what you have. G'Luck!
~Ave
"Sorry, can't be perfect"

yupz nice start you have here ... just so many characters i am confused right now. maybe you should introduce them slower?? iono ... just a thought you don't have to listen 'cuz i'm not critisizing this i like it

yeah if this messes up your formatting i know how you feel same thing happened to me. if you use word ... after you type it out, click "save as" then drop down the option "Web page" instead of the default "Word document" ... it should work then. if you don't use word iono, but it should be around the same process fiddle around with it

keep writing i want an update soon! and read and review my story "protector"!
~k8

This is totally not boring! Especially the way you've fit in all the different cultural references... this story has some great potential, I hope you keep it up.

As for the italics and underlines, you need to use HTML for that. Personally, I think it's too much trouble to be even worth it.

hey! This is good! How can you say it's boring? It's getting me interested. Good stuff!

And to tell you the truth, I had problems to when my fonts. they can't seem to be neither underlined or cursive whenever I want them too. Hopefully, someone will help us on that! :)

ZL