When I read it aloud, all the words somehow "click" together and the images they conjured... hope I'm making sense here. A very smooth poem, very edgy and very beautiful.

I like this one. I've told you that before. It reminds me of a poem I wrote. Hah, yeah I like the songs that remind me of things I've written. I guess I can relate to them more. It also reminds me of a setting I see when I close my eyes. Brief, Cold, Haunting, Brittle. the only objection I have is to "fields falling." It irks me a bit, but otherwise,the song is lovely. Have you shared this one with Satan?

beautiful. I normally despise rhyming schemes, (because most people abuse them so badly) but this was a nice relief from the masses. :) well done.

Nice, and Robert Frosty!

A good poem that, although short, packs a deep meaning of the discovery of one's past. I don't quite understand the metaphor of the snow and icicles, if we do meet again, could you explain it to me? Cheers.

On another note, I can say that I've been a busy little beehive releasing many songs and poems, and I would appreciate it if you could take a look at my latest offerings, as I have done for you. (shameless plug, never dies ;)

*pushes people out of the way* I love you the most so I review first. see. I love it you know that its beautiful x