Love it...creates a really clear picture in your mind.

toldja to post it! and it got nice reviews so i was right!

me likeys!

*Sigh* I so felt like that today. Anyways, awesome poem, i really like it.

I think it'd be more effective if you split it up into stanzas, so "Sitting here waiting" was more emphasized or whatever.

But like. Much like. No dots...goody.

Really like.

~Flamewing

You write so many deep poems using every day things or places. You have a skill I wish to learn, and your example of that is astounding.

I love it! Keep up the good work, Courtney!

Love always,
Megs

I LOVE THIS POEM! YOU BETTER SUBMIT IT TO ART LIT!
~Octopus