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| Anjeni Windsinger 2005-01-05 ch 1,  | abuseQuite possibly one of the best poems I've ever read. Your descriptions, diction, emotions were spot-on perfect. Beautiful work. |
| Lady B.V Rose 2004-01-21 ch 1, | abuseO_O *briefly stunned* ...err...I've lost my train of thought...I'm too stunned by the images in here...wow... >my stained glass moon has sunk until june> That is just damned gorgeous...*sigh* I'd add this to faves but I'm out of room! I'm trying not to have anything from F/A...long story... - Dai M~H xx (BVR... did I already tell ya that?) |
| glitterjewele 2003-12-28 ch 1, | abusevery interesting indeed. definitely reminiscint of arranged marriages (not that i think that's what it's about, just the little girl in wedding pearls conjured up the image). some very pretty lines in here, and some very complex emotions. favorites: "my stained glass moon" (o so pretty); "glittering little cockroach" (o so original); and "fight the fate until it falls" (o such great alliteration, loved the way that line sounded). excellent work. |
| godawful teen-angst poetry 2003-12-10 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. Just...*so* brilliant. Everything is perfectly placed, the rhythm works, your word choice/diction is a step beyond impressive, and I can't tell you how in love I am with the second to last stanza. "no 1989 to meld us again" has got to be the best analogy ever for...either heartbreak or breaking off of a relationship. Or both. Either way, this is beautiful, and it's on my favorites. Great job! ~lyv |
| BloodBrother 2003-11-23 ch 1, | abuseYou've got to be one of the best poets on FP, seriousley. This was absolutely beautiful -- third stanza was the best. |
| The Black Rider 2003-11-21 ch 1, | abuseSo hauntingly beautiful and passionate, as always. Your poetry is always a perfect expression of who you are. The first and third stanzas were perfect. Excellent work. |
| Seeing Starz 2003-11-19 ch 1, | abuseWow, how do you write so well? Very descriptive. *Seeing Starz* |
| fatalxparadisex 2003-11-19 ch 1, | abusewow was this ever good... i loved how you were so descripive with it... you have true talent... keep writing... and please read and review some of my stuff if you get the chance... thanks:) |