Reviews for An Orchestra's Rehearsal

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destinee's notebook 2008-06-12 ch 1,	abuseO_O ...Ooh...wow. Scary, scary.
Amorelle 2006-07-10 ch 1,	abusee! I love this! I'm a cellist and orchestra has always been boring unless I've stabbed someone with my bow ^-^ I love their battle. I wish my orchestra would do something like that ^-^
skylines 2006-05-29 ch 1,	abuseHehheheh this sounds familiar... Very random, but random is greatly appreciated. MICE! Flight of the Musquitos ^_^ Love it =)
Cellar Door Mongrel 2005-06-19 ch 1,	abuseHaha. Flight of the Mosquitoes. Cute. Band pieces- always chaotic, entertaining, amusing. Gotta Love it. :) (I'm sorry if I leave short reviews... I don't really know what to say in them...)
Cloud Burst 2004-10-31 ch 1,	abuseLMAO awesome work!! ^^
B.G.M Boss 2004-04-26 ch 1,	abuseanother cute and funny story! great job.
IrishVampire13 2004-04-24 ch 1,	abuseAHAHAHAHA! Oh, my God, that was hilarious! This is going on my Favorites list. :-D
Twildre Droan 2004-04-23 ch 1,	abuseThis is so funny! If your teacher had any sense of humor I bet you got a good grade on that homework. Twas great fun to read. Twildre (MICE!)
blacklives4ever 2004-03-09 ch 1,	abuseHAHA! This was SO funny... I swear, my orchestra can be like this sometimes. It's hilarious. This was GREAT... funny, and kind of reminded me of a story about my classroom during an earthquake that I wrote in 5th grade. It was full of random stuff like people just jumping around the classroom, the teacher yelling at everyone to get under their desks while some kid was trying to explain the math problem to her, and it ended with my friend waking up and wondering what was going on, and then Ian would kind of kick away the blackboard that had fallen on top of him and mentioned something about smelling lunch. It was so stupid, it was funny. What I especially liked about this short story was Mr. Moor continuously yelling, "MICE!" at random points. Did you do this for an assignment or something? I mean, I just noticeed the underlined words. I know what "blithely" means! We had to learn that when we were reading "The Diary Of Anne Frank." Quick question: how do you underline and italizise stuff? I know how to make words bold on my profile but not on the actual stories I am uploading. Thanks for the good laugh :-D
Karma 2004-02-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat was the most random thing I have ever read... it was great! VERY FUNNY!
RainShadow2005 2004-02-06 ch 1,	abuseEven though I don't play an instrument, this struck me as one of the funniest short stories I've ever read. "Use the flutes!" shouted the violins. I was cracking up over that. Was this written as an assignment because their were certain words underlined and I assumed that you had to have them like that for a reason, like an assignment or something.
Rhetorics 2004-01-28 ch 1,	abuseHey Deborah. It’s me, Geoffrey. Heh, I finally got onto one of your fics. Well, I have to say that I absolutely love your style. Well… there really isn’t any style that I don’t particularly like, but hey, at least you’re not the first. The whole story just makes me nostalgic of the horrors of Orchestra. I quite school orchestra a long time ago, and wow, reading this kind of makes me miss it a little. I can just remember the days… sneaking in food across to fellow cellists when Mr. L turned to chastise the violins. Well, the beginning really humored me. The whole atmosphere is light and a bit comical, which is perfect for a temperamental conductor who is struggling with his poor orchestra. You know, I was just discussing with my sister how just playing the instrument you play kind of fits the personality you are (i.e. Trumpets=obnoxious, violins=pompous, flutes=polite), but of course, it’s just a joke. The only thing I have to criticize is that… there is a lot of vocabulary in there. I think my SAT score just boosted another 100 right there Hahah. I got most of it however, but sometimes, I had to press the D button. Well, overall, great theme, really nostalgic. You really portrayed the characters well, and that poor conductor… I should give Mr. L more credit for doing the stuff he does Hahah. Wow… imagine if he had to do a symphonic orchestra… Hahah, it might even turn out into a war. Well, sorry I couldn’t get to your other stories. Once I find time, I’ll read more of your other fics (the assassin one really intrigued me). You’ve really got talent (puts me to shame) so keep up with your updates. I’ll be checking back later. -Geoff
Aislinn Moriarty 2004-01-22 ch 1,	abuseOh, that was hilarious! wipes tears of laughter from her eyes And that poor cello player—getting thwacked in the head with a trombone—ouch. You did a stupendous job of portraying a truly corrupted and unfocused orchestra! there's never a dull moment, -literally & physically speaking- Lmao. —Aislinn P.S. Thank you for reviewing my poem! Hehe, to be truthful, I don't know how that children part came in.. maybe just sorta popped into place or something. lol. Toodles!
Cindy Moon 2004-01-22 ch 1,	abuseAlthough I don't play in an orchestra, I can relate. (By the way, I liked the nice touch with the vocabulary words. English assignment?) Wonderful comedy! ^^ Mr. Moor is a riot. (Oh gosh, my view of life is so dismal) -Cindy Moon *)
Lirael Goldenhand 2004-01-22 ch 1,	abuseBWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That's AWESOME! "MICE!" "We're Amazons of the shrieking chalkboard!" Oh my...I...dies of laughter That is really and truly AWESOME!

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