It's beautiful, and it rhymes. ^_^ Great job. I think you should write more poems. You're quite good at it. I mean, this poem is simple, but it shows so much emotion. ^_^

Wow! this is like wickedishly sing-songishly! mhm, mhm, mhm!! awesome! ^^

Great title, a lot of descriptive lines... it is not as angsty as I thougth it would be...

i like it:) its intresting, and new. great peice of writing, keep it up:)

Aw . . . that's sad. Good flow to the poem and imagery. Is Mizu lonely? Hmm. Wonderful job anyway, I want to see December . . .

what can i say? i know these are supposed to provide constructive criticism but i have none. i would without a doubt buy this poem if i didn't get if for free (mwhahaha) ok yes shutting up now...history is so boring