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| Mao 2006-09-28 ch 5, anon. | abuseMel, THe story is good. Good use of love tri w.Blake and Jayden. I want to know more about you and how u r feeling. Why all the stuff about abuse in the beginning and not having that keep going on thru the entire story. Hard to tell how much is real and how much is fiction. Try to be a little more descriptive of place and feelings. |
| Trish 2005-02-27 ch 5, anon. | abuseThis story is really great! Why haven't you updated it for almost a year...it's a good one so please consider it! |
| xillbeyourcupid 2004-07-01 ch 5,  | abuseaw this story is totally cute to! will she end up with blake or jayden or either? ^_~ please update soon! |
| Ashley the Fair 2004-06-18 ch 5, | abuseI love Blake! He sounds so sexy! *drools* OK, anyway, I like where it's going so far and right now I want her to end up with Blake. But I might change my opinion. Well, update soon! Great chappie. ~Ashlita |
| Raine0211 2004-06-08 ch 5, | abuseCute chappie girl! Just got to it in my mailbox! Write more soon. Want to see what happens with this little...love triangle i suppose you would call it! ~Lisa~ |
| Gypsy Pen 2004-06-03 ch 5, | abusei haven't read this story in awhile so it was fine you didn't have many updates. i enjoyed the two chapters you've added since last time i read. can't wait for updates, can't wait to see what will happen... :) godspen |
| FamousOneLiners 2004-05-22 ch 5, | abuseI love this story, you must update soon! :] |
| legacee 2004-04-16 ch 4, anon. | abusewow, blake is an interesting character. And serves jayden right for leadin gher on...kinda... keep writing. Are any of the characters like yourself? |
| Lisa 2004-04-16 ch 4, anon. | abuseOh wait...I remember you...you used to write stories...um, ya! Well, congratulations on the update. Lovely chap, the jealousy is one I wish people would experience over me! *sigh* Anywho. *applause* for updating, you are way better than me...haha. Write more soon dahling. ~Lisa~ |
| Gypsy Pen 2004-04-05 ch 3, | abuseaww.. that's so sad... i love the characters and story so far, keep it up. (oh, and i'm waiting for The Ripple Affect 2 update! lol.) |
| Ashley the Fair 2003-12-29 ch 3, | abuseGreat chapter, as usual. I loved the kiss! Jayden seems confused to his own feelings. Just hook up already! Heh. Well, I hope to see some more of Blake and Damien. Update soon. ^_^ ~Ashley |
| BellezAzul 2003-12-27 ch 3, | abuseGood story. Jayden... that's an awesome name. Oh yeah, I like it! Update sooner, ok? Good job! |
| Raine0211 2003-12-27 ch 3, | abuseI'm here! I promise. Great chapter. Its like I remember you telling me back when we first met. I was like...wow, familiarity. Hehe. great chapter. I told you that would come out great and it did. I loved it! Write more soon. I'm glad you overcame that deathly WB! ~Lisa~ |
| Romantic Chic 2003-12-27 ch 3, anon. | abusei love the plot progression and i have to say the last time was the best.. so realistic.. please continue and write more.. btw who is this damien character he sounds interesting and so does blake nice name.. but that kiss.. hmm... is melody gonna have hard desicions on her hands.. lol.. update soon |
| Raine0211 2003-12-27 ch 1, | abuseHidy ho! I added you to my fav authors. I couldn't before, I realize, because my max was filled...so I deleted someone else. ;) So great start (although I've already read it *wink wink* ~Lisa~ |