I think it was beautifully written. "Dandelion Dreams" is a perfect title for such a pretty piece.

Amazing! I hope I dont lose my sight...
By the way, I am a HUGE fan of yours.
You're like my idol. :D

And standing by would be a worthy action... Nice descriptions. The narrative was a little difficult to follow in places but I like the progression. *that were mature*. I like your dragons, and each one is unique. You could work on the flow - it's a little awkward in places - maybe read it out to yourself? Gr... wish it didn't have such a sad ending. I wish you didn't believe that all the children would be going to lose their sight.

I am utterly amazed. Your talent seems unlimited.

I especially like story because it contains one of my many regrets: that childhood comes to an end. I always had the feeling that small children see the world differently, better, perhaps.

Very nice.

*Smiles*
that is awesome.
Just... so cool.
*Searches for a better Adjective*
*Fails*
*Grin*
That is a bit sad, though. Really touching...
*Bows*
_Ahrar