You are an absolutely incredible poet, dear.
Have I told you that lately?
You need to get published.
As in, now.

This poem is like a child's story book. Every statement has a picture to go with it... I guess this really is a fairy tale...
~Immortal Spirit~

Oh, my.
Words cannot describe this, m'dear. It's just absolutely amazing. There are so many parts of it to praise that I just don't know where I would start.
It seems that this is something you have to read over and over, because it has this brilliant impact-- it really takes over, and leaves the reader with an almost overwhelming sense of reality-- of the utter brilliance of this poem. The pictures you paint with this are real, and clear, and the way it all flows together is just magical.
From the moment you start reading this, you know it's good. The opening lines just bring you into this amazing world, and you remain there even after the poem is done. You've created a real, magical world with this, and I just love it.
Don't ever give up on your writing, m'dear. Your words are just perfect-- your writing flawless. Keep it up, because this is just . . . wow!
~ Cinna.

this is cool, it's such a retorical question... is love forever? bravo!

>mysterykittyx

Laura, this is beyond gorgeous. I'm stunned. Your imagery is just amazing, and your words are perfect.

Ah, you're brilliant.

very well writtena nd orignal.

Excellent choice of words; fantastic imagery ensues.

"appleless tress bow in the
sobing wind" for one example and it really brings out the mood of desolation and crushed hopes and fantasies.

Bravo.

Izzy J.