 firehoney 2004-02-01 . chapter 1This is very good, short and sweet. A little bit to happy, but still very well put. |
 Kaiya Darkwolf 2004-01-30 . chapter 1to happy for me but still good |
 lostlainien 2003-11-23 . chapter 1I like this - it's very uplifting. Keep writing!
xx |
 Anonymous 2003-11-22 . chapter 1 hmm good, a bit odd but definately a keeper. *cough cough* not taking any drugs are we?
ya know i'm just kidding
Good poem |
 auzz 2003-11-21 . chapter 1Good, but could follow better rythym. |