Thank you for reviewing my poem. This one is interesting, and as you said is a completely different topic than mine. Thanks again.

Great poem, Cortez. it's really cryptic. they are getting better and better. wish i could write like you. Keep up the good work!
*Jade

excellent:)
Keep Writing!

This was yet another amazing poem. I liked the reference to peter pan in the first stanza. _
The One and Only

yet again I've read another one of you're brilliant poems they have so much life and the flow so well like moonlights glow instead of suns heated ray

This is beautiful.
I was captivated after the first line.
I love the way this seems so incredibly lucid, yet completely incoherent at the same time.
Thanks for your review!

Wow, what a lovely poem. I love your writing style in this poem, it makes it seem bittersweet. Good job :)

Wow, that's really pretty. I like it double spaced, it makes the shape nicer, makes the fact that the lines are almost the same length really cool, when it could have been less cool. I like the line break-up, and exspecially the first two stanzas. Great job!