|Reviews for Wasteland|
| matchmakerqtpie 8/28/04 . chapter 1
Thank you for reviewing my poem. This one is interesting, and as you said is a completely different topic than mine. Thanks again.
| Jade Daughter of Darkness 5/17/04 . chapter 1
Great poem, Cortez. it's really cryptic. they are getting better and better. wish i could write like you. Keep up the good work!
| Daughter3 of Fabian Cortez 3/27/04 . chapter 1
| Ebony Moonlight 3/11/04 . chapter 1
This was yet another amazing poem. I liked the reference to peter pan in the first stanza. _
The One and Only
| the piano 2/13/04 . chapter 1
yet again I've read another one of you're brilliant poems they have so much life and the flow so well like moonlights glow instead of suns heated ray
| Medea3 12/9/03 . chapter 1
This is beautiful.
I was captivated after the first line.
I love the way this seems so incredibly lucid, yet completely incoherent at the same time.
Thanks for your review!
| breaker-one 11/22/03 . chapter 1
Wow, what a lovely poem. I love your writing style in this poem, it makes it seem bittersweet. Good job :)
| AutumnRhapsody 11/21/03 . chapter 1
Wow, that's really pretty. I like it double spaced, it makes the shape nicer, makes the fact that the lines are almost the same length really cool, when it could have been less cool. I like the line break-up, and exspecially the first two stanzas. Great job!