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| Reviews for Black Clouds of Smoke |
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   Infinite Smiles 1/22/04 . chapter 1I like the words and wording of this one...Very beautifully written |
| Ria Mala 11/28/03 . chapter 1 Powerful. I like it. Although it's kinda depressing...it reminds me of Sept. 11. The whole black smoke...screaming...enduring it all. |
| shinco 11/26/03 . chapter 1 That was very detailed! You did a very nice job with this one! Coolness! |
| Heather Montgomery 11/25/03 . chapter 1 Wonderful metaphors... beautiful poem. I love it. The rhythm is perfect and it flows really well. Great job! |
| SeaVoi 11/21/03 . chapter 1 I don't think this is about me, so you know thats good for me. But not for you, geez another internet silence, um BOB! Love You ONATOPP |
