|Reviews for Black Clouds of Smoke|
| Infinite Smiles 1/22/04 . chapter 1
I like the words and wording of this one...Very beautifully written
| Ria Mala 11/28/03 . chapter 1
Powerful. I like it. Although it's kinda depressing...it reminds me of Sept. 11. The whole black smoke...screaming...enduring it all.
| shinco 11/26/03 . chapter 1
That was very detailed! You did a very nice job with this one! Coolness!
| Heather Montgomery 11/25/03 . chapter 1
Wonderful metaphors... beautiful poem. I love it. The rhythm is perfect and it flows really well. Great job!
| SeaVoi 11/21/03 . chapter 1
I don't think this is about me, so you know thats good for me. But not for you, geez another internet silence, um BOB! Love You ONATOPP