|Reviews for Victim of the Fox|
| oprod reader 12/30/04 . chapter 1
description was vivid!but it was rather sad though
| mizu no kokoro 11/30/03 . chapter 1
Wow, that was really vivid But foxes aren't that bad
Never the same
| Artemis Astralstar 11/27/03 . chapter 1
beautiful story, and wonderful metaphors... well done, very well written, *places on faves list.*
| MauraMellon 11/22/03 . chapter 1
This is a beautiful poem, and you are truly a good poet. In fact, I think this is one of my favorites.
Some of the best phrases:
"floor the cooling ground"
"fall like silk on silk"
"all and one died 'neath the sun"
Really nice! The only stumble is "did," which you use a lot and is just a device to keep the meter.
| MoonBlues 11/21/03 . chapter 1
I really love this poem. I love the rythme and everything about it. Oh I do wish I could write poems like this.
All mine come out dark and pensive though. Bleh. P
Anyway I love this poem. Love it dahling!