Wow. I can't say I've read this, thought I thought I'd read everything up here. I really like this. Its a bit sad, and reminds me a lot of you. Its a very Syra-ish poem. You will play me a song soon, teehee. This is a grand work, really is.

^__^ awesome. i would write more, but i have about a million more poems to read! hehe. ^_~

Really lovely, I like how it flows. Exquisiete.

I like it! It's straight to the point...the short lines make it easy to read and it still gives a nice image and idea. Very good..keep writing. :) Read some of my stuff if you get a chance.

Beautiful. It flows very well, and it's a little sad. Nice work!

Nice... real nice..
i believe most, can't say all ;)
most music lovers feel the same way!
write more!
i think you have writing potential!

^_^